Can someone check my vocab sentences for correctness?

1. Since John left his flowers in the sun too long, they were desiccated by the time he remembered to water them. (CPX)


2. A brief cessation in the flow of the gunshot victim’s blood caused a panic in the emergency room, but luckily the doctors soon corrected it. (CPX)


3. When deciding on a car to buy, Mike juxtaposed the specifications of the two cars in order to compare them and make a final decision. (CPX)


4. The garrulous English class forced the substitute teacher to become angry, which led to him leaving a nasty note for the students’ regular teacher. (CPX)


5. The glitter on Maggie’s painting she did in art class scintillated on the wall of her mother’s kitchen, where it proudly hung. (CPX)


6. When her boyfriend of three years broke up with her, Jessica went through a very lachrymose period of time for a few weeks. (CPX)


7. Dane Cook is the epitome of a stand-up comic, and many other comics imitate his methods. (CP)


8. The normally hyper fish was acting quite languid and fish was

Can someone check my vocab sentences for correctness?
Yes, they are correct.




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