Is this poem good enough to be submitted for publishing?

Hey guys, I spent the last whole hour making this poem, I hope you like it. I know, it might be corny, but I gave it a try.....





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Don't you think 2 Dots is such a strange name,


and Asmaa and her videos are just looking for some fame? (YouTube, great place to start nowadays.)





The cricket guy, Tearz,


he's always goin "Cheers!" (I wonder what he does when someone gets him out in a cricket match, hmmm)





If my VP was Saladin Ayyubi,


I'd easily win the US Presidency. (2029, here I come!)





Maria must really like pink flowers,


and she's on Y! Answers for hours and hours. (And hours.)





There's something annoying me, and I can't take it anymore,


And that is, "What does KMI stand for?" (Seriousy, what DOES it stand for?)





KoKo really likes books, lots and lots and lots,


and Zahrah, her answers are just full of dots and dots and dots! (.......)





Talking to Julia is like talking to a brick wall,


But, Insha'Allah, may Allah guide us all. (Including Muslims!)

Is this poem good enough to be submitted for publishing?
wow, yahoo answers is a like a whole different world, theres so much going on. I liked it, but i dont know, somethings lacking. I dont think its good enough to be published, no offense, i mean if you wrote about a different topic, sure. But what kind of publisher will know all these people like you know them...you know what im saying?


hahha, email me i want to show you one of my poems. :)





all in all it wasnt bad
Reply:Lol wow this is one of the rare times that I like your questions. Well done! Did you get this idea from me...did you see my poem?
Reply:Nice, I like it!
Reply:aww... its so good!





i also like poems. here is my poem! it was written when i remember my cousins and family in pakistan:





Walking through those two airport doors, my heart was mixing with emotions.


I was standing there nervously, but my dad’s eyes searching for them.


Finally spotting them, seeing them coming toward us, I knew this couldn’t be a dream.


I tried pinching myself, but the reality was clear, I was there, and there was nothing I could do about it.





There were times I felt like it wasn’t my home, but after coming back,


I realized that I had more homes than imagined.


I was welcome everywhere, but truly; I was always living there, in all of your hearts.





There I felt loved and cared for, by you and everyone,


But I knew this would only last for a few more days.


I made every moment special there, and after coming back I missed everyone.





The feeling of love, happiness, and caring will always stay within me.


All the fun we had, the sound of your laughter still ringing in my ears,


Made me realize how alone I felt sometimes,


But knowing that I would come back again, sometime, made me glad.





Sometimes being annoyed, but then getting along with everyone.


I knew that when I left, my heart would want to go back,


But everyone has to move ahead in life.


Your voices ring in my ears, and tears come to my eyes,


For I wish was there with you.





All the memories, I left with you, are also here with me.


The jokes, the talks, the fun will never be forgotten.


Most importantly, that trip to my home country will never be forgotten.
Reply:seriously am i the only one here with no poetic talent????tht was hilarious and beautiful!!and cute..
Reply:LOL, that was awesome!! =)
Reply:Woah! very talented you are=)
Reply:Good one Wahabbi
Reply:hahahhha..nice poem
Reply:Loved it....I'm glad Ramadan section is having a poetry session today.





Got more?
Reply:they are really good, keep it up dude!
Reply:Mashallah you have some good talent. If rapping was halal you should just ahsame it's haram. Rabe yafathak.
Reply:Yes it is , great work
Reply::) thats a nice work. good going :)





I just love delicate and soft flowers... Life is like that, isn't it ? :) nice try bro ~!
Reply:OMG....this is really really good.....i can see that u have put alot of thought into it....i think my part is really really funny





i think we should get like a hall of fame for this section......this should definitely be in it..





oh yeah....the reason why i put dots is coz i wite exactly what i feel......so the dots just represent thought


.........does that get on peoples nerves....idk.....tell me if it does...i'll try n stop it





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edit: idk y but i read the poem in a smooth soulful voice....(not literally...just in my head)....it makes it sound alot better





edit: if u can....i mean if u have time...i dont want u to waste it just for me...but can u write a poem about rain...like pouring rain....just how it looks on glass, the sound of it, the beauty of it, the purity etc...i think u'd do good....i'll ask the other guy writing the poems aswell.....=)
Reply:lol that is a good one





ha ha thats funny everybody thinks thats the brains real picture. was anybody her ever a wrestling fan? thats bobby the brain heenan





edit: brain yeah he was funny but now wrestling sucks because nobody's hype,funny or entertaining.


thats why im a fan of the 80's and 90's wrestling
Reply:like dude where am i? jks.





really good, keep up the work.
Reply:hey put me in them 2!!!!!!!


love it!!!!!


i write poems like dat too...
Reply:I thought it was very interesting .... thanks for sharing
Reply:Keep 'em comin dude!





Cmon braino chill... Look at the bright side.. Accordin to the Quran you are goin to hell :)
Reply:lool


thanx for putin my name first in ur poem:)


that is actually v good..btw how old are you


hmm...i found my name strange to but everyone started calling me two dots so decided to keep it lol
Reply:Now, we have to find you a publisher who knows about the Ramadan section in Y!A.





Hmmm..
Reply:fantastic job!
Reply:Lol. I actually read the whole thing (I don't normally read posts this big). I liked it, i think you have a talent. Keep writing its a gift.
Reply:oh come on


thats all you could do with me?


"what does KMI stand for"





tsk tsk I expected better


lol





edit: the brain's avatar is not a picture of himself
Reply:Poetry.com accepts all poetry, but limits the amounts of lines you can use.



super nanny