How good is this poem? 1-10?

Lily of the Nile





Moonlight slips through


beaconing softly to her,


Sitting in this bedroom


gleams an elegant flower.





Stunningly a lily blooms,


But no gardens to see,


Though breathing perfume


Slowly exhilarating me.





Her silk petals confess,


An emotion taking hold,


This feeling I'll attest


It's the love she bestows.





Walls masking her gasps,


Until lovingly she smiles,


Time disappearing fast


as we lay here awhile.





Her light shines on me


shining until tomorrow,


There she'll always be


With that smile I know.

How good is this poem? 1-10?
7.5
Reply:wow. that is really beautiful. i love it, and it's such a pretty title. ok, i am going to give your poem a... (drum roll please!) 10/10! but of course that was expected, so...I'll shake it up a bit and give you an additional 4+ points! now you have enough points to open one of the three doors in front of you! what's that? door three?! (open door.) ta! da! you get a free smiley face! =) ha! ha! ha! enjoy!
Reply:It conjured images and feelings.


For that I give you a 9.2.


the .8 is only missing because


when I looked back at the title,


the Nile evokes some foreign


exotic mysticism that was neither


present nor necessary to illicit


deep feeling and meaning.


Good job but the Nile part


throws me a little. Excellent!


Thanks for good poetry today.
Reply:i think whoever this is for will love it, i love when guys are able to pour out the sentimental side yet no to soft, it was really sweet and steady i give it a 10!
Reply:It really was Beautiful. Did you write it?


it flowed really well and i like the slow, yet steady rhythm to it. extremely well written :)


i'd give it a 6 or maybe a 7 out of 10
Reply:Its preety good. I will give you a 7.5. The only thing is i need to hear you read it to know exactly how it goes.
Reply:9.5!! Well done!





Is it in any kind of form, or is it just free verse??





I love the personification of it all. Very well done. You made it work well. =]
Reply:I can honestly say, this is amazing. Iy's beautiful. 10 from me (:


Can I please save a copy of this? I won't ever distribute it or sell it or whatever, lol (:
Reply:10/10 well done
Reply:Amazing, absolutely stunning. I'd say about a 9
Reply:(: 8


good job.
Reply:9 n a half. That is really good i love poetry I could read it for hours and I really love this poem
Reply:7
Reply:8
Reply:way better than the garbage most people post on here.





9
Reply:Very pretty





I'll give you a 9. Your girl will love it
Reply:great job!





8/10
Reply:did you write that?





id say about a 9
Reply:i like that its good :) 10
Reply:AWW i like it! i love to write poetry....well done. 9
Reply:thats very good, seriously......i give u a 10.......great job....have anymore
Reply:it sucks my lil sister writes better then this



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