What do you think of this short poem?

Though the Gothic walls


of the Granite city


look blacker


with rain,


broken stars


open out,


like flowers,


in the rough cut stones;


miserable and nourished.





We know that God


has a strange sense of humour.

What do you think of this short poem?
I love it....it's refreshing to read something online that doesn't sound like everything else....don't change!
Reply:Well written. love it, a star for you too. keep up the good work
Reply:I didn't get it I'm afraid.
Reply:I liked it. It was funny.


Star for you!
Reply:The closing couplet has a haiku-esque quality to it.


Nice stuff.
Reply:It's a very vivid poem.... meaning that I can imagine exactly what it is talking about, and for poems I think this is great!


Very good... well done to you!
Reply:Yes it is very nice...
Reply:nice i lyke the last lines..we know that god has a sense of humour..hu knows mayb u will become a famous poet? :P
Reply:Not bad at all! Makes a change for intelligence on this site.



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