Does anyone like this short story?

Her crushed heart laid broken as she stumbled to the walls of fait. Her eyes began to shut slowly as she started to say, Im a flower that wont ever bloom. Unexpectedly her one true forbidden love stood right behind her. But you bloomed for me, he said as he finished off her sentence. he never really knew she excisted until he saw her on her knees, praying, crying, dreaming that he would somehow know that her prayers had come true, he finally talked to her. I bloomed for you, because you watered me, gave me sunlight and took care of me, she answered his question. He felt bad, so he held her in his arms, she closed her eyes, but stopped breathing, it was too late, she was dead. To this day he holds a grudge, against himself, until the day came when he went to go meet her, and the fact of never returning.





i wrote this but plz help me find a title.

Does anyone like this short story?
Too many loose ends..............what did she die of, why was her true love forbidden, how could he tell her she watered him and gave him sunlight if he didn't know she existed until he saw her on her knees?


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Reply:The Flowers that Bloomed





Or something like that would work.
Reply:Flowers for the Water.


it will make people think.
Reply:Forbidden Love?


Untold Story?


Flower of Love?


Blooming?


Dead Love?
Reply:here are a few ideas:





Unbloomed Love





Broken Flower





Flowering Love





The Flower who never loved





HOPE THESE ARE GOOD!
Reply:Wilted flowers
Reply:It's got feeling but not a lot of description or identity. No offense this is more like a paragraph not a short story.


Maybe, "He blooms for Her"



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