A new poem, what do you think?

Behind the Potted Flowers





Our home has been opened


as a museum.


There are the patched up holes in the wall


and recorded stories


for each one.


There are the broken plates and mugs,


in the cabinet;


at least the ones who's handles were glued


back on, and the others that only retained chips.


They have their stories as well.


And there are the stained stairs,


the spills being the least of what fell.


And the two broken doors,


the one with the visible gash,


and the one leading to the patio


with the torn dangling screen.


They all have similar stories.


But the oldest one,


and the least believable,


is the one that goes with the marked up bedpost,


and busted springs.


That's probably the only one you'll need to hear.


Outside, two tall wilting tulips take the tired posture


we never did.

A new poem, what do you think?
Not bad. Pretty good!
Reply:This is indeep unique, and very discriptive, keep it up and write your heart out





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Reply:It is a fantastic poem. I love it. When the poet says the one leanding to the patio , it is good.
Reply:Funny and sad. Kinda sorta like my own love life.
Reply:that is a very unique poem!!!... who made it?
Reply:its an ok poem



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